I am applying for a health sciences research bursary for high school students. Good marks and extracurriculars aside, the application requires a 1000 word essay on "yourself", "your career aspirations" and "why you think you deserve this bursary?" "You may like to include your extra curriculars, hobbies and/or any other special interests". (These are the instructions)
Now, I have a variety of ideas and a variety of questions as this is my first time writing this sort of essay. The problem I seem to have (apart from writer's block) is that I'm not sure how to string together the required topics in an essay that flows. The "yourself" and "career aspirations" portions are easily woven together, but I'm not sure how to write about that last part without sounding boastful or cocky. Also, do you think it's a good idea to write this essay about a person who strongly influenced me, taught me to value what I do value, interested me in pursuing life science, pushed me to pursue activities etc that I am most proud of (related to why I am qualified)? I thought that may be a nice way to incorporate all three elements in an essay that has a singular topic instead of drifting around everywhere. Opinions? Is it alright to write about someone who influenced you as a way of presenting yourself as the essay does specify "yourself"?
Thank you very much.
This is my first post and I'm excited to later put up the essay once it's done to get some brilliant opinons. This site seems wonderful.
Now, I have a variety of ideas and a variety of questions as this is my first time writing this sort of essay. The problem I seem to have (apart from writer's block) is that I'm not sure how to string together the required topics in an essay that flows. The "yourself" and "career aspirations" portions are easily woven together, but I'm not sure how to write about that last part without sounding boastful or cocky. Also, do you think it's a good idea to write this essay about a person who strongly influenced me, taught me to value what I do value, interested me in pursuing life science, pushed me to pursue activities etc that I am most proud of (related to why I am qualified)? I thought that may be a nice way to incorporate all three elements in an essay that has a singular topic instead of drifting around everywhere. Opinions? Is it alright to write about someone who influenced you as a way of presenting yourself as the essay does specify "yourself"?
Thank you very much.
This is my first post and I'm excited to later put up the essay once it's done to get some brilliant opinons. This site seems wonderful.