A famous person I admire is Adele. She is a British artist famous for her powerful voice and emotional ballad songs. Some of her popular tracks are "Rolling in the Deep", "Hello", and "Set Fire to the Rain". She has won several awards, including Grammys, for her talent. The song I love most is "Skyfall", which has a dramatic melody and is full of feeling. I admire her not only because she composed my favorite song, but also because of the inspiration she brings to me with her ability to express emotions in songs. Her music allows me to dive into the stories of her tracks. She is also known for being very relatable and honest. She openly shares her personal experiences in her music and in the interview. Another reason I like Adele is how she deals with trouble and takes care of herself. When facing difficulties, she has taken time off her career to focus on herself, to look for support from her family and keep a positive attitude to overcome tough times. I have learned a great deal from her, which has been very helpful, and I appreciate it.
Adele - about a famous person you like. Who is this person? What is this person's job?
While I understand why you admire Adele as a singer and you are in awe of her talent, I am afraid that the reasons that you provide for liking her and very superficial and do not really delve into the deep insight and self reflection that the questions are asking about. Normally, students respond to this prompt by indicating the name of someone that inspired them to get into their field of interest as a college student. They discuss the foundation of their interests and how the person actually had a hand in either changing their lives or giving them a direction in life. I learned a lot about Adele from your writing, but I do not really see how your experience with her could be considered life altering or influential. You are keeping it basic by simply discussing your enjoyment of her music and her public persona. That is not enough of a response for this sort of prompt.
