The advanced technology help students easily learn knowledge. TOEFL essay

The topic of people' views on something can be approached from different angles due to its complexity. Some people tend to believe technology help students learn more information and learn it more quickly while others seem to disagree with it. I have also developed my own point of view as well. I favor the former position, that is, I think modern technology help students learn more information and learn it more quickly.

To begin with, the advanced technology help students easily learn knowledge. For example, in the past time, the students could only learn from books or from schools. As the technology has developed, the student can not only learn from books, but also from Internet, online lectures, or BBS. Thus, distance or time will not be a problem of learning.

In addition, students can get wisdoms from different ways. Some students like learning with visual aids while others prefer learning from the teachers. With the modern technology, various learning methods could be chosen by students. For instance, I always prefer discussing with people about the problem I face with study. If I had born in ancient time, I might have been a bad student for talking to classmates all the time during the lecture. However, as a modern student, I can be a quiet and good student in class. And then after the class, I go to the discussion board online to discuss with friends and solve the problems together. Therefore, the learning may be more effective and suitable to everyone.

With the reasons above, I think the modern technology can help students learn more information and learn it more quickly. That is not to say, of course, that the technology always do good to students. However, I think the reasons I have provided in favor of my points of view are stronger.

I try my best to type this in 30min. It hard for me to reach 300 words in the time limit. Besides, I think my points are weak= =. Does anyone can tell me the tips of writting the Indepent writting? Thanks a lot~~~

TOEFL you have to write min 300 words but I studied some link on you tube they told if you write more than 450 words with good grammar and structure you can definitely get more than 26.

Khushi Gulnawar

1. students get knowledge( better than wisdoms) in different ways.
2. problem I face in studies.
3.If I were born in the ancient times...

although I feel that you could have added the point the human brain grasps more when it actually visualizes the things rather than just by reading about that...like there are many experiments available on Internet that can neither be done on routine basis in the college laboratories nor can be understood just by reading in the books.

You can give example of projectors used in the modern classrooms.
televisions has also helped a lot in providing knowledge in various subjects.
Modern libraries are also much better than what were there in the older days.
ebooks are the latest advancements that has emerged as a boon to the students.

You need an s:
The topic of people's views on...

... helps students learn...

... from the Internet, online lectures, or BBS.

In addition, students can get wisdoms wisdom from different sources. ways .

That is not to say, of course, that the technology always does good to for students.

However, I think the reasons I have provided in favor of my points of view are stronger than any reasons to support the opposite view.

I hope these ideas help you! Try to find every change I made and learn why it was necessary. Good luck!! This must be hard, because 30 minutes is not a long time.

Every day, technology is getting advanced. With techonlogy advancement, students are also started using them in their daily lives. I strongly agree with the statement 'nowadays students can learn more information and learn it more quickly with the help of technology. Studets use computers, cellphones and portable music players to get and to share the information.

With help of internet, students can get easy and fast access to information. They do not have to spend time to search information in the libraries or textbook. Even schools have made a provision for students by setting up libraby on internet. So, students can get access library 24 hours without any problem. Sometimes, library has limited source and limited numbers of edition of books whereas on internet, students can access information from all over the world. I often go on internet website such as google for getting information on any term. It saves my lots of time. Students often send assignments to their professor through internet.

Students use computers to keep daily routine records of their class journals, assignments and research papers. So, they do not need time to spare time to manage all things. They have easy access whenever they want. They can easily rub them or easily add information. It also saves lots of papers and ink which keeps healthy environment maintained.

Students also use cellphones to share information through MMS, SMS and Email among freinds. Students have started listening lectures for learning purpose through portable music player known as ipods. Students install class lectures into ipod and they listen them while travelling or eating. So, they do not need to take out separate time. My friend, Vikas always listen english songs to learn english and make it better.

In brief, nowadays students become more advanced with technology and from technology, students can learn as much as they can.

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hi,
i will taking toefl test! so i just read your essay. i have several opinion to you!
-i think you reading more passages and use a detail as possibly as you can to support your ideas, such as statistics or personality example and etc.

-in the end of paragraph, use a conclusion sentence to supporting your idea again.
-in your essay, you often express oral or not writing language, you should read more passages to imporve your essay language!
good luck!