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Advertisement encourages to buy in bulk, whereas it should promote high quality of the products sold


devabe2005 46 / 97  
Jan 26, 2013   #1
QUESTION:
Advertisement encourages consumers to buy in bulk, whereas it should promote high quality of the products sold. Do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER:
Advertisement helps to create awareness about latest products and their offers. It motivates people to buy more products but is should promote the quality of the product which it already sold. I completely agree that the advertisement intrigue people to buy additional products but it is not showing importance to the quality of the product.

Advertisement attracts people to buy more products because it motivates them to buy by providing offers and discounts. For example, the recent advertisement in newspaper which shows,"buy one and get one for any product from this shop, offer valid till end of this month". People are attracted to this offer and buy plenty instead of one to save their money.

Moreover, advertisement shows additional feature of the product which convince consumer to buy more items. For instance, Pepsodent tooth paste advertisement in which they are showing that it will relieve from tooth sensitiveness which makes people to try and test which result in more sale of Pepsodent tooth paste

In addition, the advertiser uses celebrity to endorse the product for the advertisement. To illustrate, In India famous cricketer Sachin Tendulkar endorse "boost" health drink and saying "Boost is the secret of my energy". This advertisement makes cricket fans buy more boost product and result in high rise in sale of the product.

In a nutshell, advertisement motivates people to buy more product than improving the quality of the product. The advertiser has to take extra care in quality of the product. The quality and additional benefits should be added to the advertisement so that it result in benefit to both high profit for the advertisers and also to the society.

jessmaguana 1 / 3 1  
Jan 26, 2013   #2
"about the latest products..."
"but it should promote the quality of the product which is being sold."

"advertisment(s) show ... feature(s) ... comsumer(s)

"For instance, the Pepsodent tooth paste advertisement show that it will relieve people from tooth sensitiveness which make people try the toothpaste which result in more sale of Pepsodent tooth paste"

"In addition, the advertisers use celebrity figures to endorse the product. To illustrate, In India, the famous cricketer Sachin Tendulkar endorses "boost" health drink and says "Boost is the secret of my energy". This advertisement makes cricket fans buy more boost product and result in high rise in sale of the product."

In a nutshell, advertisements motivate people to buy more product rather than improving the quality of the product. The advertiser has to take extra care in the quality of the product. The quality and additional benefits should be added to the advertisement so that the results benefit to both high profit for the advertisers and also to the society.
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Jan 26, 2013   #3
Advertisement helps to create awareness about latest products and their offers.

... plural sounds better;
Advertisements help create awareness about latest products and offers.

It motivates people to buy more products but is should promote the quality of the product which it already sold

.... What do you mean by "which it already sold? ", that's not really clear to me.... Also I wish you said this differently;

that the advertisements intrigue people

Advertisements attracts people to buy more products because it motivates them to buy by providing offers and discounts.

Advertisement attracts people to buy more products because it motivates them to buy by providing offers and discounts. For example, the recent advertisement in newspaper which shows,"buy one and get one for any product from this shop, offer valid till end of this month". People are attracted to this offer and buy plenty instead of one to save their money.

I think you need to align your reasoning with the topic... The topic suggests that advertisements promotes people to buy more whereas they should promote people to buy better quality. So in this para, you need to bring up that fact;

People are tempted to buy more quantity when advertisements inform them about special offers and discounts of a particular product even when they do not have a real need to buy. For example, "buy one get one free " offer for shampoos may tempt people to buy more than what they really require in hope of having stocks for future use. However, these shampoos may not be as good as in their original quality by the time they are used. In this case, advertisements really do not help people with the quality of soap they use.
gsisland 2 / 2 1  
Jan 26, 2013   #4
Advertisement helps to create awareness about latest products and their offers. It motivates people to buy more products but is should promote the quality of the product

which it already sold.
Advertisements help to create awareness about the latest products and their offers. this motivates people to buy more products than what we need firstly.

I completely agree that the advertisement intrigue people to buy additional products but it is not showing importance to the quality of the product.(but it does not give a guarantee against the good that put to sale.)

Advertisement attracts people to buy more products because it motivates(instigates ) them to buy by providing offers and discounts. For example, the recent advertisement in

For instance, Pepsodent tooth paste advertisement in which they are showing that it will relieve from tooth sensitiveness which makes people to try and test which result in

(as Pepsodent tooth paste advertisement in which they are showing that it will relieve from tooth sensitiveness, this tempts people to try and test it, which result in~ )
caoxue 2 / 1  
Jan 28, 2013   #5
but it is not showing importance to the quality of the product 》other than reflect the quality of products


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