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Advertising - (write a thesis statement).


Tramiuh 1 / -  
Oct 24, 2019   #1

controversial advertisement?



Different methods of advertisement are used in common media and among them few are considered morally controversial and misleading. I strongly agree the criticism that the promotion made by companies like tobaco and fashion industries, try to disguise social aspecd ts, give partial information and try to trigger emotion of people to misguide their judgment.

roswita116 16 / 37 17  
Oct 25, 2019   #2
Hi, there. I would rewrite your statement as below:

There are different methods of advertisement are utilized in common media. Among them, some of are considered utterly controversial and misleading. I strongly agree that the criticism of promotion which was made by companies such as tobacco and fashion industry tries to disguise social aspect ts and give partial information. Furthermore, they tend to trigger emotion of people to lead to the wrong direction.

Hope it would help.😁😁


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