The effects of an ageing population are considerate.
... I know you can present this better :DAging population has become an issue of concern today.
While I accept that population aging presents the positive effects, I believe that
this trend'sits advantages are outweighed by the disadvantage.
Impressive Introduction as always :)
However, I would argue that the disadvantages of the aging population
....Better keep in plural form
We have seen that many young adults in Japan
will have to look after elderly people , with spending less time in working.
Overall, a very good essay! When is the exam?