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Do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate?


kiwisuk 2 / 2  
Jun 1, 2015   #1
Q. Some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

Internet have been generalized in global village. People between countries can operate businesses with surprising speed and feel each other very close, whereas it is considerable that negative side is worsening.

Practically speaking, many residents in the global town can easily build a network thanks to advanced communication and technology, which is helpful for businesses as well as individuals. Visual chatting allows to communicate among family members and to hold conferences with different location's workers. In the future, people might be able to communicate virtual 3-D vision. Moreover, internet create new market. It is the online market that sellers can meet broaden consumers, at the same time customers can easily perform price comparison sitting in chairs. Furthermore, many students have searched quality articles from foreign universities. This have been helping our planet to develop academic level fast.

However, damages by invasion of privacy are increasing. The unwanted leaks of private information have caused suicide or sociophobia to not only celebrities but also public. Confidential letters are invaded by hackers without any frameworks and restrictions. Online emails with advertisements have approached to individuals, spreading viruses or fraud codes to make damages. In addition, the fast speed is affecting to immature young people. They get fast tempered or aggressive because they cannot learn endurance from the internet. Apparently, all of these make difficult human relationships not easing it.

In a nutshell, what the internet carried benefits to human beings came to the surface, meanwhile fears of the internet are lurking. In this situation, it is recommended that people should have netiquettes in order to acquire a decent internet communication culture. (269)

Mustafa1991 8 / 373 4  
Jun 1, 2015   #2
This question must be answered in a direct way. The literal answer is yes. The figurative answer is no. The communication architecture involves personal, social, and business transference of information, but these spheres have not been impacted in the same way.

The nuance between transmitting information and conveying understanding flips the question into the philosophical realm, if need be.

There's a lot of angles to this question. Example: Yes, I can chat with my friend on instant messenger. No, I can't have a conversation with my son because he's online so much.

Apologies for lack of cohesion in this post.
IqbalThemi 44 / 46 13  
Jun 2, 2015   #3
I think you need to rewrite your introduction here.

Internet have been generalized in global village. People between countries can operate businesses with surprising speed and feel each other very close, whereas it is considerable that negative side is worsening.

Some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

Let me try,
The world seems smaller and smaller since the internet changes considerably more ways of communication in people life. Therefore, I tend to have a tendency that the internet brings convenience for people to develop close relationship easily to each others as this provides some features which can be simpler to be accessed.
lovejapanjapan 1 / 4  
Jun 3, 2015   #4
Internet have been generalized in global village.
Just my humble opinion, I found this sentence boring and you should write something more descriptive. Are you referring the global villages to the countryside all over the world ? If yes, please write it more accurately.

Maybe you can begin this way,
Communication has been evolving a great deal over the years in comparison to olden days where people using only snail mails to contact or merely reading newspapers daily seems to be the only way to keep themselves updated has changed into a more environment-friendly way through Internet access to electronic news reading materials online. Therefore, there is no deny that with constant exposure to the Internet from cities all the way to countrysides has made the world smaller and borderless as well but the popularity of Internet itself might lead to an increase of the social problems among the people around the world. In my opinion, I partially agree with the statement because every coin has its two sides.


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