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Applying for the position advertise in a weekend paper for a job as a local tour guide.



huynhthanhhuyen 4 / -  
Sep 22, 2013   #1
[?]Have you see an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.

"Dear sir/ madam!
I am writing to your advertisement to become a local tour guide position at your company. The job is attractive to me and I am doing the fulfill in the letter of job application, I hope to be got an interview from yours after you.

At the present I am living with my family in Mekong Delta where are farm and seafood product are too popular. I was majoring in English major at the university of Tay Do where located in Can Tho that your company is also to be. I would like to become a tour guide because the job that people are working is able to travel and can get a lot of friends around the world. In addition, there are a lot of foreigners visit Can Tho city every year when the tourism company need to find the tour guide who can complicate with the guests. Moreover, most of my free time I usually study languages, I am interested in studying English, French, Japanese and Korean, I am confident in using English and Japanese.

Finally, I need experience in guiding and repairing for my getting the international tour card that my teachers told me should get it.

Pahan 1 / 1824  
Sep 22, 2013   #2
I am writing to your advertisement to become a local tour guide position at your company.

I write this with reference to your advertisement on (???? write the name of the news paper) on (date) for the position of local tour guide.

The job is attractive to me and I am doing the fulfill in the letter of job application, I hope to be got an interview from yours after you.

... this sentence needs improvement with its presentation. You are looking for a job and therefore this letter should sound more formal.
I believe I have the right qualifications, skills and attitude to perform as an effective local tour guide.

Atthe present I am living with my family in Mekong Delta where arewhich is popular for farming and seafood productsare too popular .

I was am majoring in English major at the university of Tay Do wherewhich is located in Can Tho thatwhere your company is also to betoo is located.
dumi 1 / 6793  
Sep 22, 2013   #3
I would like to become a tour guide because the job that people are working is able to travel and can get a lot of friends around the world.

As a person who loves travelling around and making new friends, I confident that I can work as a tour guide with a true passion.

In addition, there are a lot of foreigners who visit Can Tho city every year. (stop here)Therefore tourism companycompanies need to find the tour guides who can complicatecommunicate with the guests fluently .

It's important to talk about your capabilities to perform as an effective tour guide. Talk about your language skills, knowledge about the local whereabouts, PR skills, contacts, sound attitude etc. that are important for a good tour guide.


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