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Artic snow dissolved are killing animals and will be caribou aground



PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 26, 2016   #1
Continuing decrease of sea-ice shield is causing disorder on ecosystem along the artic, and might spell the last more variety animals than properly thought.
Low appearance species possibly will be in suffering. Researcher were calculated data on sea snow and zooplankton, fish and seabirds in the South-east Bering Sea among year 1975 and 2014. They found which most seabird and zooplankton were less rich where sea ice liquid early in spring, telling that these species will decrease in warmer temperature.

A stuck of ice might hamper the diaspora of plants, dooming them to elimination. Researcher collected previous data on sea ice and plants original arrival to the Arctic to sho that plants are likely to group new place after sea ice dominant.

rosadesiana 38 / 38  
Sep 26, 2016   #2
Hi PHA !
you have done a great job, here are some suggestions ..
keep writing !!

==> Continuingcontinous decrease of sea-ice shield is ...

==> ... possibly will be in sufferingsuffer condition

==> Researcher werehave calculated data on sea ...

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