Task 2 : NOWADAYS ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE IS BEING USED TO DRIVE CAR.

Full topic:
Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive car.

Why is it happening ? Is it positive or negative development ?

Nowadays it is very often to see the advertisement of automobile's self-navigating system everywhere. Obviously, people shift to habit of automatic car driving gradually under assistance of artificial intelligence. This is a positive development that technology accomplishments contribute to daily life.

We are living in an era which humans witness remarkable achievements on technology or computer science. It is true that all these advantages bring many benefits and one of these is using artificial intelligence in car driving. Majority of us find troublesome in driving our own cars everyday due to various distractions ,so we need a solution for this matter. Artificial intelligence is developed to tackle this question by integrating with the automobile's navigating system to give instructions to drivers. We take Tesla car as an example: driver gives order by voice or input by hands to the system the details of destination, then the system automatically figure out the route and give directions to driver. Hence, we will not fear or confuse whenever we start driving car anymore.

In addition, Utilizing artificial intelligence in driving car is a positive improvement because it helps to predict the possible circumstances as: congestion area, traffic accidents or peak time . According to recent researches, there is a significant decrease on accidents on road after numerous automobile company started applying the artificial intelligence to control the driving process. Therefore, it is advisable that artificial intelligence technology should be an unseparated part of the automobile globally.

In general, we ought to popularize the application of artificial intelligence in car driving to public in order that everyone understands the its benefits and accept to use it universally, and we educate the young generation to innovate the artificial intelligence to be far better in future.

The prompt paraphrase and direct question responses that comprise the personal opinion are all incorrect. The prompt restatement is nowhere near the original as it changed the topic from artificial intelligence driving cars to advertisements for self driving cars. Those are 2 immensely different topic focuses that only have artificially driven cars as a commonality. The subjects of the discussion are correct, but the topic reference is incorrect. The reference point is how articial intelligence is now being used to drive cars. As for the personal opinion, there are no direct reference topics that can be perceived as answers to the question provided. The writer did an inefficient job in the first paragraph and these will reflect in the low TA score for that section.

The writer tends to go off topic when introducing his discussion points. He must lose the habit of creating long but irrelevant introductions and instead, go directly to the topic of his discussion. Use topic sentences as an introduction to create efficient paragraph presentations. This can be specifically seen in the first reasoning paragraph where it took him 2 sentences to get to the point. The paragraph was disconnected between the first 2 sentences and the succeeding presentation in the paragraph.

If the writer will refocus his writing skills properly, he will be able to pass the test. He has shown that he can (sometimes) stick to the point and fully discuss a given question. However, he needs to learn to stop being distracted by side discussions that he accidentally (or intentionally) presents. Those will lower his overall score.