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The authority is required to create publicity for familiarizing renewable sources of energy


Abrahamlincoln 54 / 56  
Oct 6, 2016   #1
Government should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The majority of people state that the authority is required to create publicity for familiarizing renewable sources of energy. I, therefore, agree with the statement that foster another resources will carry a large number of upsides.

On the one hand. Firstly, the non-renewable energy such as fuels, coal petroleum, and natural gas will disappear someday. It needs thousand of years to be reproduced. In order to meet human's needs, people are compulsory to move to another resource which could be renewable. Secondly, the alternative resources would be more economical because those could be generated themselves. Afterward, these would be more accessible also for those who not have the chance early. In addition, the renewable energy is more friendly environment which helps to diminish pollution and greenhouse.

Furthermore, alternative resources such sunlight, the wind, and rain would meet people's needs who live in remote areas or rural regions since these relatively easy to obtain. Even it needs sophisticated facilities such as solar cell but the benefits outweigh its investment. For example: in 2012, Chinese government built 100 solar power in Chinua region to fulfill society's needs especially electricity. After implementing this idea, Chinua society's life become better and solar power carries a lot of benefits such as job opportunities, better infrastructure, and current electricity.

In conclusion, I completely agree that the publicity of the alternative resources should be executed by the government because it brings positive consequences outweigh its drawbacks. Personally, I am fear that there is no scarcity resources could be utilized due to its limitation.

Note: Don't be hesitate to give any constructive comments

fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Oct 6, 2016   #2
Hello abraham,
I do like read your essay
You have done great, yet let me give you some suggestion

==> ... authority is required to create publicity forfamiliarizing (familiarising) renewable sources of energy.
... that foster another resources will carry a large number of upsides(you can exacerbate your statement by adding support words, ie. especially to overcome global warming--> makes your statement getting stronger)

==>On the one hand. Firstly, the non-renewable energy ...
Afterward(s), these would be more accessible ...
. (You have given several intense benefits of alternative energy, yet from the former to the latter, you haven't given at least one real example and also the result of your instance)

==> ... solar power in Chinua region to fulfill society's needs especially electricity. After implementing this idea, Chinua society's life... (your statement clearly show up, you should have to make the paragraph before as clear as this passage)

==> In conclusion, (...) could be utiliz (s)ed due to its limitation.

Good luck and keep writing :)
justivy03 - / 2,371 607  
Oct 6, 2016   #3
Hi Lincoln, below is my take on your essay.

- The majority of people state that the authority - when you say "authority" who are they?

- is required to create publicity for familiarizingto learn about renewable sources of energy.
- I, therefore, agree with the statement
- that, to foster another resources will
- carry a large number of upsideshuge advantage .

- On the one hand. Firstly , the non-renewable
- gas will disappear somedayrun out one day .
- It needs thousands of years to be reproduced.
- In order to meet human'speoples needs,
- people areit is compulsory to move to
- because those could be generated themselvesit is self generating .
- Afterward, theseThese would be more
- accessible also for those who did not have the chance early .
- In addition, the renewable energy is more friendly environmentally friendly which helps to diminish

There you have it Lincoln, I hope the above remarks make it to your revision.


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