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The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) in 2011 by regions

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Oct 14, 2023   #1

literacy rate by region and gender

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of male and female literacy rate in 7 different regions .
Overall, a cursory glance at the bar chart below is sufficient to make it vivid that the proportion of literate male and female in 7 different regions in 2011. It is obvious that the Central Asia and Eastern Europe have the highest rate of literate men and women. On the other hand, the Sub-Saharan's citizen has the lowest ability to read and write.

As can be seen from the chart, the central Asia zone led the way with the percentage of literate female and male by maximumly 99% and 100% respectively. The zone in second place is Central/Eastern Europe, in which male's ability to read and write is 1% lower than female's ability.

The greatest difference, which was about 20%, between the 64 per cent literate female and male belonged to South and West Asia. The following regions, which is Sub-Saharan Africa with a percentage of around 65%, additionally, the female is 12% less than the males.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,976 4812  
Oct 14, 2023   #2
cursory glance at the bar chart below

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