The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years.

Stats of cars numbers in Europe

The bar chart illustrates information about how many cars of each person in the total of 1000 people in five European countries in 2005, 2009 and 2015, in comparison with the average of these countries.

Overall, there was an increase of the number of cars in Europe from 2005 to 2015, except country 3 and country 4. Another interesting point is that country 4 was the only country where there was no change in the number of cars in three yeas.

Looking at the details, there were around 300 per 1000 people in country 1 in 2005. Then, the figure improved to 400 per 1000 people in 2009. However, it reduced again to about 200 per 1000 people in 2015. This figure was the lowest in bar chart. By contrast, the number of cars in country 5 was roughly 900 per 1000 people in 2005. Then, it went up to around 990 per 1000 people in 2015, higher than the average figure for Europe by roughly 200.

In addition, the figures of country 3 and country 4 were similar, approximately 700. However, the figure of country 3 went down to around 690 in 2005 while the figure of country 4 did not change in three years.

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