Writing task 1 bar graph about the internet users in 3 countries; Greece, Denmark, and Canada

Internet usage in a graph

The bar graph gives information about how many people using the Internet in Greece , Denmark , Canada and the world average from 1998 to 2013.
Overall, it is notable that Denmark and Canada had considerably more users than the others during the 15-year period. By contrast , the number of internet users in Greece was the lowest , which was close to the world average , but increased gradually just as both other countries did.

Looking at the graph more closely , one can see that Denmark roughly quadruped from 23000 to 95000 people over 15 years . It ranked second in 1998 then had surpassed Canada by 2003 . After significant growth ,the figure for Canada increased slightly ,the nation's overall users expanded by more than threefold from 1998 to 2013 . Besides , Greece experienced 20000 new users every five years . Although the world average climbed went up by 30000 people , there was a widen gap between it and three other countries in the last period in question.

Please provide the graph next time. I cannot review your essay for proper content response without it. I am uncertain as to whether you properly addressed the requirements of the task or, if you did not provide a proper report at all because of the lack of reference point.

The task 1 essay is composed of 3 paragraphs, no more than 175-190 words. While you wrote enough words to warrant a serious review of your work, the lack of proper formatting will be an issue for this essay. The summary overview appears to be incomplete in information presentation. There is no clear trending statement. The information provided does not have any clear reference points. Most importantly, there are only 2 paragraphs when you are required to 3 paragraphs for the task 1 essay.

I will not comment on the content of the report at this point as there is no image with which to compare it to. I can do that next time, if you follow the forum rules and upload the image related to the report you have written. Please be aware of your punctuation usage and spacing when typing. You often have extra spaces between words and punctuation marks improperly placed that make the essay more difficult to read.

@cielofu
Analyzing without the data is difficult. There could be a way to attach it to the comments. Maybe embed a link to an image or something. Could you check that?