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Basketball is my tool to alleviate pressure; My hobby (to play basketbal)



Lawrence 1 / -  
Oct 15, 2011   #1
Describe a hobby you had when you were a child. *
You should say:
what it was *
how you did this activity *
how you became interested in this hobby *
and explain why you liked this hobby. *

My hobby
To be frank, I only have a hobby that is play basketball. Initially, I would like to say I am real like this sport. I always spend two or three hours playing basketball with my friends after class. There is no doubt that basketball is stimulating, because you can sway the outcome of match in last few minutes, in other words, maybe you will play a dominate role in a basketball match, it's amazing and fantastic. Subsequently, I will tell you the reason of I like play basketball. As you may know, the pressure of Chinese students is very big so relaxation is essential to Chinese students. Basketball is my tool to alleviate pressure. All in all, play basketball is an entertaining sports, I like and enjoy it.

shanne84 - / 1  
Oct 15, 2011   #2
[b]my hobby when i was little was a love to play basketball. when im went to MS2 for the first time i was in 6th grade i join the basketball team. Now i am in the 8th grade i had agreat time playing basketball for my life.


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