Some believe that vegan diet is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
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an opinion essay on food habits

Some people doesn't prefer to have non-vegetables such as chicken, meat and some sea foods. They also tells that consume these are not good for health. It seems to me that, say no to non-veg is good for healthier life though there are some advantages in having meat or fish in the meal.

To begin with, I read in newspaper, reports and seen some surveys mentioned that naturally produced vegetables are healthier than meat or fish. One of the advantages of vegetables like carrots, potatoes, tomatoes and so on is that they are rich in vitamins, minerals...etc. So consuming them daily will keep people away from most of the diseases. In addition that vegetables contains less fat contents which is the another advantage over non-veg. Another reason is that these are available all the time and of course these are cheaper compare to meat or sea foods so even the middle class people can afford.

There are equally some disadvantages in having only vegetables. As per as I know, many vegetables contains less proteins compare to non-veg so there may be chances of people effect with some protein deficiency diseases.

On the other hand, consume non- veg daily leads to so many health issues. Recently i heard in the news that people eat chicken or meat effect with cancer compare to those who are not eat them. More over there is high probability of getting heart diseases in the non-vegetarians. I see many adults even not turned 40 years were died because of cardiac diseases especially heart attack. An obesity is another major problem in having non-veg. Nowadays younger generation is suffering from an obesity which is not the good sign for the society.

To sum up, i choose not to eat meat or fish because there are more disadvantages than the advantages. In my view those who not, eat chicken or meat have longer life compare to those who consume the non-veg. There are higher chances of health problems like cancer, heart diseases and obesity in those who take non-veg daily. These situations are not good for the society since majority of young generation facing health issues.

I honestly think you need to revise your essay, particularly in the first paragraph. you should also be careful with your grammar, it's very poor. You need to improve your writing, there are so many errors.

@vinu460 your essay is not going to pass in an actual test setting. For one thing, the essay that you wrote is extremely confusing in content due to your lack of control over your English thought process. This creates a terribly set up sentence presentation and extremely poor grammar use. Your paragraphs are not very coherent because of the lack of cohesiveness in your presentation, specifically in the opening statement. This is one essay that truly causes extreme stress for the reader and as such, will not be rated highly in the actual test setting. You do not know how to properly present the opening paraphrase and you also do not know that you cannot use a personal opinion as a closing paragraph. The closing paragraph is only a summation of the presented discussion. There are so many errors in your presentation that I do not know where to begin. All I can advise you is to read the presentation of similar discussions based on the same topic that can be found in this forum. Learn from their presentation. Pay particular attention to the advice as to how to properly present an opening statement. Let me show you an example:

There some people who opt to avoid proteins in their diet. They avoid meats because they consider alternative foods are being healthier for them and more beneficial to the protection of the planet. In this essay, I will presenting a discussion regarding this opinion while also offering my point of view regarding the topic.

As you can see, an appropriate opening paragraph merely paraphrases the discussion in an accurate manner. You need to build up your English vocabulary and also learn about the use of synonyms in sentence presentations. That is the most basic point at which you should focus the start of your English skills improvement. Understand the meaning behind the words. That is the most important thing for you to do now.