Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

topic: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

1. In summary, starting university studies abroad has a wider range of merits than demertits. Different cultures is a serious problem of studying in another nation. Neverthless, this issue can be surpass by the significant advantage the trend brings such as the faculty to obtain modern teaching and learning methods. Futhermore, the potential to increase roblem-solving skills which are crucial to students' academic success.

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