Allow me to give you some suggestions.
Overall, there are several features which ...
Remember the time signal, you have to use "past tense"
change = verb
changing = noun
entertain = verb
enterainment = noun
You should type:
Overall, there were
several features which experienced a changing
such as (...), the form of entertainment
"While" use for contrasing something, you do not need to put "but".
While some (...) district saw a gradual rise
to the size of the lake.
For the rest, I just found you made some mistakes about grammar.
Just for reminding you, the time signal is from 2000 to 2009, so you should use past tense.
Hope it helps you :)