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The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused.
A breakdown of the process of water cycle is represented in the diagram. Although this consists of three different stages to complete the cycle, this only requires simple steps.
First, the household wastewater having been used is sent to the wastewater treatment plant to purify the sewage. After the water is cleaned, it is carried to the river. There is also water recycled in the tank so as that it can be used again for household needs.
A closer look at the clouds, when the rain falls, the rainwater is immediately collected in the rainwater tank. This tank saves the water for gardening purpose. The rest of uncollected water falls into the drainage system as storm-water, and then it is directly carried into the stream via drain.
The dam is useful to store the rainwater as a reservoir. In this case, this area experiences drought. Following that, the water from the dam is supplied to the water treatment plant. Before being distributed to the houses, this water is treated to produce drinking water for human consumption.
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The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused.
A breakdown of the process of water cycle is represented in the diagram. Although this consists of three different stages to complete the cycle, this only requires simple steps.
First, the household wastewater having been used is sent to the wastewater treatment plant to purify the sewage. After the water is cleaned, it is carried to the river. There is also water recycled in the tank so as that it can be used again for household needs.
A closer look at the clouds, when the rain falls, the rainwater is immediately collected in the rainwater tank. This tank saves the water for gardening purpose. The rest of uncollected water falls into the drainage system as storm-water, and then it is directly carried into the stream via drain.
The dam is useful to store the rainwater as a reservoir. In this case, this area experiences drought. Following that, the water from the dam is supplied to the water treatment plant. Before being distributed to the houses, this water is treated to produce drinking water for human consumption.
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