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A breakdown of the structure and processes that are used to produce electricity



Wilyaftika23 46 / 31  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

A breakdown of the structure and processes that are used to produce electricity by wave power is revealed by two diagrams. Overall, it can be seen that the wave and tide are used to generate the electricity and the ebb structure if functioned to rotate a turbine to produce the electricity.

To begin with, there are some equipment that are needed in processing, such as turbine, chamber with column and the main resource is wave.The electricity generating machine work in two methods. The first diagram indicates that the construction is located near the sea. Firstly, the wave gets inside the chamber and makes an air pressure that rotate the turbine that is placed inside a column. Then, the rotation of the turbine generates electricity which is stored in the cells and it has already used.

The second illustration is how to produce electricity by using the ebb tide of the sea. Firstly, the water outside from the column of chamber and the air pressure is made again by the opposite direction. After that, it is spin the turbine regardless of the direction of the air flow. As a results, electricity continues to be generated.


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justivy03 - / 2265  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
Hi Wily, here's another approach to your analysis.

- is revealed byin the two diagrams.
- ... seen that the waves and tides are used to ...
- the ebb structure - what is an EBB structure?

- needed in processingthis process ,
- the main re source is the waves .
- Firstly , the wave gets inside the chamber
- and makes angives air pressure
- that rotates the turbine that ...
- it has alreadyis ready to be used.

There you have it Wily, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your revision. This analysis is well composed, however, it will do a lot of good if you work more on your logical input and the series of analysis should be dissected first then you give the overall perspective of the diagram.


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