The brief life of Circus from ancient world in Romans

The circus is one of the oldest forms of entertainment. History of circus started in ancient romans around sixth century B.C. chariot races were more popular and also gladiator fights and display of exotic animals like elephants and tigers. Over time the site was permanently retired and entertainment was reduced to small bands of travelling performers and animal trainers. However, the circus survive to make a return to its former grandeur in the eighteenth century.

On the other hand, during the late 1700s, an Englishman named Philip Ashley founded the first modern circus. We was skilled rider who invented stunt riding on horseback. He performed in a circus ring and expanded his act to clowns, acrobats, and parade of trained animals.

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Hello @PHA2016, I got some suggestions for your writing.

Here my advice:

1. ... named Philip Ashley founded the first modern circus. ( Pay attention to regular and irregular verbs)

2. WeHe was a skilled rider who invented ... (pay attention in pronoun and the article)

Hi Mr. Fatta.
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We HE was A skilled rider who invented stunt ...
... acrobats, and a parade of trained TRAINING animals.

Note: Make you sure there needs to Infinitive or gerund. For example

trained animals

, it is actually converted to gerund or you write noun.
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Hi Patta, here's what I think on your essay.

Two things, first, your writing has improved when it comes to the proper association of words in your sentences and their proper placement. However, the forms of the words can still be enhanced, the minor details can also be modified in order to create a complete thought and overall impact of the essay.

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I hope the above remarks and insights help and I wish to review your revision soon.