Unanswered [1] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width   Posts: 2


Budgies reveal the rule that means birds never collide in flight



Yonathan 46 / 50  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
How do birds avoid crashing into each other now isn't mystery again, Manydam Srinivasan, a scientist at University of Queensland Australia and his colleagues uncovered the simple trick when filming pairs of budgerigars flying towards each other in a narrow tunnel. Manydam stated that group hierarchy may determine which bird moves up and which moves down. Dominant bird tends to fly lower and probably because of more energy efficient and easier to go lower than fly higher, so the non-dominant bird forced to gain altitude.

Actually, this knowledge can provide inspiration for anti-collision systems in drones. Once the technology becomes available, drones have an ability to communicate with each other and to veer right when they encounter one another became a straightforward strategy to reduce collisions. But scientist still developing technology solutions that can achieve what birds do naturally

PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hello Yonathan,

... into each other now isn't is not mystery again, ...
Manydam stated that this group hierarchy (...) moves up and which moves down. (double conjuction words)

... available, drones have an ability to communicate with each other ...
But scientist are still developing technology solutions that it can achieve what ...

more attention to your conjuction word

hope these help


Home / Writing Feedback / Budgies reveal the rule that means birds never collide in flight
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳