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TASK 2-IELTS CAMBRIDGE 9- Some experts believe that it is better for children



mersad 8 / 14  
May 9, 2016   #1
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?


Over the recent years, the age of learning a new language is increasingly becoming a debatable issue. There is a special ability for language learning in childhood. In addition, nowadays, learning an international language is an essential requirement for majority of occupational or educational opportunities. Although, some experts opine teaching a non-mother tongue in earlier ages may adversely affect children's mind, I strongly believe the drawbacks of an earlier acquiring of second language are overshadowed by the benefits due to children's greater learning ability and their more free time.

Firstly, correlating with psychology, children are blessed with brilliant ability to learn. Educationalists believe a child, in comparison with an adult, not only can learn incredibly faster, but simultaneously also they can be trained even three diverse languages.

Secondly, free time is an essential pre-requirement of any progress in our life. Adolescents usually suffer from lack of enough time to accomplish their goals. Take an engineer, who has been missing outstanding job vacancies due to lack of fluent English or Dutch knowledge, for example. Although, he has numerously planned to improve his English, he has failed to progress his language learning scheme due to his hectic life. However, children have plenty of sufficient leisure time which is often wasted.

On the other hand, it is psychologically believed earlier exposure to a non-mother language will cause long-lasting emotional effects on children because of differences between language structures which result in dispiriting them. Worse still, teachers in primary schools are generalists whereas training a foreign language, in particular, to children needs qualified specialists who can utilize modern and game-oriented methods for teaching.

In conclusion, learning an international language as a general unit in elementary school seems worthwhile; nonetheless, this scheme should be harnessed in a scientists-recommended approach to minimize its flaws.

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justivy03 - / 2265  
May 9, 2016   #2
Hi Mersad, I enjoyed reading your essay, the answer you provided in this prompt is very informative, the information is based on facts and reality of life. You manage to incorporate the ideas you have to the recent events in daily life.

Moreover, you chose the simplest word you can have in order to convey your message to the readers and this is the best way you can deliver your message to your reader. Nonetheless, I believe it's a well written essay.

Keep it up and I hope you will continue writing, more reviews will come, not only in this essay but to all other essays you will be posting here on EF and I hope the suggestions are helpful and even more useful in your revision.Should you need further assistance, we will be here to help you out and hopefully you will follow through with the suggested modifications.


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