report on weather changes
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Task 1 Question
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
This is a report regarding to how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects immediate information on the weather so as to make reliable forecasts.
The weather information would first be collected via several facilities, radar for example. After analysis and forecasting, the Bureau would prepare and release the broadcast through different media.
First of all, for the information collected by satellite, it would be analyzed with satellite photo. Drifting buoy is another method for the Bureau to collect weather information as well. The information collected in this way would be forecasted and interpreted by making synoptic chart. The last access to get the information is radar, which is able to exchange information collected by satellite and drifting buoy. Radar screen is in turn contributed to analysis and forecasting process.
After analyzing and forecasting, information would be prepared for broadcast with computer. The weather information would be broadcasted in three main ways, which are via recorded announcement, radio and reported by newsrecorders.