it is true that people use their money to become
It is not people in general, but celebrities. Stay focus on the topic.
for example;
giving an example should be longer that the one you show above. To help you write a good example, always have these questions: who/ how many/ when/ what/ how/ result
only money and glamour look are not enough for a person to be recognized anymore, it is importance
There are two main sentences running together. This is bad grammar
a person need
A subject-verb agreement
the young generation these days is very conscious toward positive lifestyles.
Well, I feel this is off-topic