Writing Task 1: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012

The charts illustrate the percentages of men and women in both full-time and part-time employment in the United Kingdom in 1988 and 2012.

Overall, it can be seen that the total number of people who were paid to work for a company or organization in the UK in 2012 was higher than in 1988. In addition, the number of men who work both part-time and full-time is also higher than that of women.

In 1998, the number of men employed full-time was 12,539,000, which accounts for approximately half and nearly nine times more than the data for men working part-time, which is just 6%. Meanwhile, the figure for women working part-time was over a fifth and full-time was under a fifth, which stood at 22% and 19%, respectively.

By 2012, the statistics for men working full-time and women working part-time had decreased slightly by approximately 5%, while the opposite was true for the data for men working part-time and women working full-time. However, the total number of workers, both men and women, still witnessed an upward trend of about 6 million people over a 24-year period.

Your summary overview is incomplete. It does not completely identify the kind of chart that was presented. So the reader has no idea if this is a line, bar, or pie chart. That presentation does not help the reader imagine how the information might have been divided based upon the image type.

The paragraph presentations are also problematic as you have not presented the standard format requirement of at least 3-5 sentences per paragraph. That is the reason why each data analysis consideration is under developed and lacking in proper comparison development. You need to add more information to the comparisons that you write. There is plenty of room for extended analysis presentations.