Children should be allowed and guided to partake in free time activities

Some people believe that school going children have so much free time. They should spend it by doing it more school work. What do you think??

School going children too are busy in this ultra-modern society. They too need some leisure.

Busy parents in twenty first century are more concerned about performance of their children in examinations. Whenever they return home from work , found kids playing or involved in other activities. As a result, they rebuke the child and force him to study hard. On the other hand, youngsters in their school life are busier with classes, tutorials, demonstrations, project or assignement completions, etc. Consequently they become fed up of this, especially after school hours. They think leisure time activities are only ways through which they can reduce their stress level.

Also, a recent research has proved that the students who induldge themselves with recreational activities; become more capable of scoring good marks in examination as compared to their counterparts. On contrary, children who devote more time to studies and less to or neglect the importance of games and other leisure time activities, become mentally less sharp than others.

If any kid gets extra time , then he should organise it by making schedule. In summer vacations, for an instance, children have too much time to spend,by limiting their time to study and leisure time activities they may be benifitted a lot.

To wind up, children should be allowed and guided to partake in free time activities do that they can cope up effectively with their educational challenges.

hey... this is too short for your introduction though it sounds good :) Don't be lazy :P


nice :)


this is not a very good sentence... the reader finds it difficult to understand what you try to say. Be more specific;
When they return home from work and find out that kids are engaged in playing or other activities they tend to get annoyed.


------- This is another reason why you say children need free time. So take it the next para.... Give one reason for one para and don't forget to support it with an example. You should provide a specific example for the reason above (busy parents). You score on giving a reason and supporting it with an example; And giving more reasons would not help you with marks :)

You have good points to be discussed. I think your grammar and vocabulary are good as well.
I suggest you to extend your essay. You will get high score then.