Part time job is becoming a new trend among the children in many countries.
TheySome children work to get more pocket money, to help their parents to earn more money, for learning or any other reason ...
People who supports the idea of children doing the paid job argue that such jobs give children a valuable work experience. Also, they understand the value of money and start taking the responsibilities.THEY
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Furthermore, such jobs stop kids from being couch potatoes and instead make them active. In some circumstances where parents are not earning enough, such paid job can be a great relief.
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