'children are free' - TOEFL- the happiest time of a person's life.

Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You hardly ever can find a person who says that he or she had unpleasant childhood. When individuals reminisce their memories they absolutely infer to some of their childhood events. As much as their events might were bitter, in their adulthood they are sweet. In my opinion, childhood is definitely the happiest time of people life in two main areas.

In the first place, children are free whatever they want to do, they are not restricted and their limitation are really rare. Because they are in the age of growth and they are allowed whatever they want to do to experience new stuffs. Therefore there is no argument and punishment for them.

In addition, in this age they are not expected to be responsible. Also, they do not have to educate and they do not have to work, so they have a lot of time in their hand to enjoy this stage of their life. As a matter of fact, I made a large number of friends in this age, and I almost traveled to all cities of my county when I was in kindergarten. Also I got familiar with different kind of animals and plants in this age.

All in all, I would maintain that the best phase of people life is their childhood. They not only free to do whatever they want without any confine or punishment, but also they are free and have a lot of time in their hands to try and experience new things and enjoy them.

Hi :) I can point out a few things that need work:

You hardly ever can find a person who says that he or she had unpleasant childhood.
This is a very strong statement to make, not sure if it is a good idea to start out by saying this. What if the person reading the paper had a terrible childhood, or some people who are very negative will only remember the bad parts of being a child. To be safe, you may want to phrase it like this: "There are many people who will say they had a wonderful childhood experience."

When individuals reminisce their memories they absolutely infer to some of their childhood events. As much as their events might were bitter, in their adulthood they are sweet.

These two sentences are confusing. I know what you mean- you are saying that some people's best memories are from their childhood. Be more clear when you write these things- the are very important points to make.

In this paragraph, there are a few things that I would edit:
In the first place, children are free to do whatever they want to do,they are not restricted and their limitation are really rare.without limitations and restrictions. Because they are in the age of growth andgrowing, they are allowed whatever they want to do to experience new stuffsthings everyday. . Therefore there is no argument and punishment for them.

The last sentence doesn't make sense- most children are at least guided by some discipline. You are making some really great points in your paper though. Keep focused on the reason you are writing the paper- make strong arguments and don't repeat yourself, use your words wisely, edit your grammar. You can do it! Good luck to you!

I like this it was very intresting to read. I enjoyed it a lot. Becareful though, there are some grammar mistakes and spelling errors overall it is a very good educative piece.

I am not that good at my english writing so i just practiced more and i got better and better, im not saying that i am amazing, just practice and you will see that you have improved your english writing skills.