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Christina Warinner: Tracking ancient diseases using ... plaque (TED.com)


Chritina Warinner, an archeological genetist at the center for Evolutionary Medicine at the University of Zurich, hope to well-understand abou evolutionary vulnerabilities of our bodies that we can enhance to mantain our health in the near future. She explained that there are different ways to approach it with extracting Human DNA from old bones and from this, she reconstructs the human genome at differents points for changing that might be related to adapt, risks factors and inherited diseases.

However, the most vital health challenges face the complex form and dynamic rather than just mutation of our genome. It interplays between genetic variation, diet, microbes and parasites. These disease revolute to complex component. In order to understand these disiases, we need to lear about the pas study of human genome and more holistic approach to human health in the past.

So, there are several numbers of challenges that we face today. We have to continue and research about this unique phenomenon research.

Hi that is very good summary. just some points

hope to well-understand abou evolutionary=>hope to well-understand about evolutionary ( I couldn't understand the meaning)
to lear about the pas study=>to learn about the past study
continue and research=>continue and research
Hello mdamanhuri77,

.., hope to well-understand about evolutionary vulnerabilities (...) can enhance to mantain maintain our health ...
... DNA from old bones and from this, then she reconstructs the human genome at differentsdifferent points for changing that it might be related to adapt...

... health challenges are face the complex form and ...
These disease revolute to complex component. In order to understand these disiases , we need to lear about ...

NB: pat attention to misspelling word because many word was wrong typing
... Medicine at the University of Zurich, hope HOPES to well-understand abou THE evolutionary vulnerabilities (...) we can enhance to mantain MAINTAIN our health in the near future. She explained that there are different ways to approach ...Confusing sentence

she explained that there are different ways to approach it. one of them is through extracting human DNA from old bones that enables her to reconstruct the human genome at different points for changing related to adaptability, risk factors, and inherited disease

... vital health challenges face ARE the complex form and DYNAMISM OF DNA rather than just ...
These diseaseS revolute REVOLUTIONIZE to complex component. In order to understand these disiases AILMENTS, we need to learN about the pasT study of human genome ...

We have to continue and THE research about this ...
Hi mdamahuri77,
I have some advice for you

Chritina Warinner, an archeologicalarchaeologicalgenetistgeneticist at the center for Evolutionary (...) well-understand about evolutionary vulnerabilities of (...) enhance to maintain our health in the near future.

... that might be related to adapt, risks factors and inherited diseases.

.., diet, microbes, and parasites. These diseases revolute to [the] complex component. In order to understand these disiasesdiseases, we need to learn about the past study of human genome and ...

Thankyou
Hope it will be helpful :)


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