The chart illustrates british attendance in cinema. persentation of age group in five yaers. the line graph shows percentageof each age of british in every year who attend the cinema.
Your introduction should be clear and simple. It seems that these two sentences depict the same meaning.The line chart compares the percentage of British people of four age groups who went to the cinema from 1990 to 2010.
In general, it can b seen to the graph taht the number of british who attend the cinema increased slowly from 1990 to 2010.Overall, there was a gradual increase in the proportion of cinema attendance of all groups, with the exception of a slight decrease between 1995 and 2000. Likewise, younger people were more likely to go to the cinema than the older groups.
in 1990 to 2000
From 1990 to 2000
aged 14 to 54 the graph relative fluctuated. instead aged 14 to 54 decline sharply
I don't get your idea here.
probably this is caused by decreasing of production film as long as this years
You don't need to give an interpretation from the data so this part could be removed.
cinema attendance in the UK rose shaprhly in all the time of years from 1990 to 2010.
This is not accurate as cinema attendance experienced a drop from 1995 to 2000.
Also, you should pay attention to your grammar and the clarity of your sentences.