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Citizens in several parts of the world research the origin of their accommodation buildings



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Aug 26, 2021   #1

finding out the history of the building we live in



It is increasingly prevalent among citizens in several parts of the world to research the origin of their accommodation building.This essay will discuss the reason and the way people seek for it.

It is an obvious fact that a considerable number of people curious about the feng shui of the location of the building they are living.They believe feng shui highly depend on the position of furniture or even the history of the house. For instance, Before moves to a new place, Asian usually hire a consultant to scrutinize everything house and give advice about the suitable location of furniture for good feng shui, which affect occupant's success, happiness and health and discover a cure for demons existed in the house.

There are two straightforward methods to easily search the origin of the house where they are living.First method is to ask local dwellers for the list of old owners and the interesting story of what was happened in the building. For example, ask neighbors if someone died or there was a murder happened in the house. This way perhaps the accuratest method. However, in case of local people are clueless about their house, people can assess the internet and search for the street where the building is located or attend the nearby library to find information of that.

In conclusion, people search for the history of the house to satisfy their curiosity and also to scrutinize for sorts of things to relocate it and therefore have a good feng shui.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15384  
Aug 27, 2021   #2
Feng Shui does not have anything to do with the history of the house or building. Feng Shui refers to the location of the residence. Feng Shui experts are not involved in the history of the place. This line of reasoning is incorrect in terms of considerations for the discussion. It is not related to the reasons why people would want to know the history of their home. The writer has provided a non-scorable paragraph here. Scores will be applied to the remaining 3 paragraphs that relate to the other aspects of the scoring and discussion instructions. The score provided will reflect that lack of proper discussion development on the writer's part. Will it be passing? That is unlikely.

Pay attention to word spacing. There should always be a space between the period and the start of the next sentence. Proofreading is also required due to spelling errors that were left uncorrected in the essay. Review word capitalization rules as well. A capital letter, unless referring to a noun, should not be used after a comma.


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