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City living or country living? advantages and disadvantages


shinjitsu 1 / -  
Aug 28, 2013   #1
City living or country living-which one is the best choice for one's life? That is the most difficult question to answer, because each of this two lifestyles have both advantages and disadvantages. Country living is healthy, quiet- perfect for people who want to live a peaceful life- but extremely boring for active people who cannot allow themselves a moment's respite. What is the best choice? First of all, we have to consider the convenience of living in a big city- all services people usually need are mostly spread in capitals and big cities, so you can get all you need in a short time and quicker than in suburbs or in small towns. However a big disadvantage of cities is crowd- in big cities lots of tourist come to see the principals attractions, so it's very hard to find a peaceful corner to stay if you want to relax open air. This big disadvantage of city living becomes the most important advantage of country living, which is very far from city's stress, mess and pollution. Still, as I previously said, also country living have big disadvantages, the most important one is lack of public transport. In a big city people can reach every place with public transport, but that's not the same thing in the countryside, where places are very distant from each other and there aren't enough public means. Both country living and city living have some disadvantages, the right choice to take depends on you.

holylua 5 / 15 2  
Aug 29, 2013   #2
good points and good writing. however, you should separate the 3 important parts of an essay: introduction, body and conclusion. You lose the points when you write continuously like above.

That is the most difficult question to answer, because each of thisthese two lifestyles havehas both advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, we have to consider the convenienceconveniences of living in a big city- all services people usually need are mostly spread inover capitals and big cities, so you can get all you need in a short time and quickermore quickly than in suburbs or in small towns
Ramitha - / 1 1  
Aug 29, 2013   #3
Here are some mistakes I see

That is the most difficult question to answer, because each of thisthese two lifestyles have both advantages and disadvantages.

Country living is healthy, quiet-quite perfect for people who want to live a peaceful life, but extremely boring for active people who cannot allow themselves a moment's respite[/quote]

First of all, we have to consider the convenienceconveniences of living in a big city such as all the services people usually need are mostly spread in over capitals and big cities, so you can get all that you need in a short time and quickermore quickly than in suburbs or in small towns.

There are a lot more mistakes... I suggest you do a complete revamp
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Aug 29, 2013   #4
I guess youare preparing for IELTS or TOEFL. It's always good to include the purpose (IELTS, TOEFL, GRE etc.) so that it's easy for us to provide you with moretask related feedbacks. If this is forsuch purpose , then you need to improveyour essay structure. Also please post this type essays into Writing feedback forum.


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