Essay about my classmate - English Essay

artem1395 1 / 1

Jan 14, 2014 #1

hi, please help me to write a small essay about my classmate. So she is from thailand , studied at the architecture (she has a bachelor degree) , she is also has bachelor degree of art. she thinks that our goals in live can change us )).

she thinks that she should study english to become success .
she thinks that money can change the people.
thank you guys , because ive no idea what to write

ravenleighann 1 / 9

Jan 14, 2014 #2

To start your essay began with talking about her life background as

she is from thailand

our worlds are very different in the perspective of many people. Once you establish her background began to incorporate her educational experience and achievements

studied at the architecture (she has a bachelor degree) , she is also has bachelor degree of art

and if there where any challenges for her to achieve these two degrees. If any challenges where faced write about them.

she thinks that our goals in live can change us )).
she thinks that she should study english to become success .
she thinks that money can change the people

Also don't forget to add her thoughts or beliefs.
Overall you have key points just use them to your advantage and bring in details to convey an essay

dumi 1 / 6793

Jan 15, 2014 #3

studied ~~at the~~ architecture

she thinks that our goals in live can change us )).

... this is not clear to me :(
Well, like in any other essay you need to have an introduction for this essay too. There you have to introduce her as a person. Tell her name, what she does, where she comes from, what are her interests etc. , but very very briefly. Then move onto your body paragraphs to elaborate the points that you feel more important in discussing about her. Do your draft and post it here for us to help you improve it :)