To start your essay began with talking about her life background as
she is from thailand
our worlds are very different in the perspective of many people. Once you establish her background began to incorporate her educational experience and achievements
studied at the architecture (she has a bachelor degree) , she is also has bachelor degree of art
and if there where any challenges for her to achieve these two degrees. If any challenges where faced write about them.
she thinks that our goals in live can change us )).
she thinks that she should study english to become success .
she thinks that money can change the people
Also don't forget to add her thoughts or beliefs.
Overall you have key points just use them to your advantage and bring in details to convey an essay