In today's world due advance technology and emerging concept of "Quantum Physics" did uncovered many mysteries, which also includes the effects of human energy field.
I'm not sure that this is necessary. It would have been a good idea had it been short. But your "quantum physics theory" takes a lot of space and for a moment i was wondering whether I'm reading the correct essay. I think you need to shorten it.
Parents are first to set the foundation and path for the child future.
Parents lay the foundation for their child's future.The basics acceptable manner in the society makes children ready to face the situation in schools.
I'm not sure I follow what you are trying to say here. :/
I think you need to write more about what influences the child. It's obvious that parents influence a child when they are young. As they get older they are more attached to their peers. Why is this?? Write more on that fact.