I am preparing for SAT .And actually i don't know exactly structure please if you know write and correct my essay.I scanned essay task and my first draft .please checkESSAY TASK
Without a clear goal to focus our energy and drive us to grow, we cease to be truly alive.
We are inert particles floating on the sea of life. This is true of not only ourselves, but our
institutions-our families, our corporations, and our societies. The moment we cease to
grow, we begin to die.
Assignment: Is growth necessary to a happy and productive life? Write an essay in which you
answer this question and discuss your point of view on this issue. You may discuss personal
or institutional growth. Support your position logically with examples from literature,
the arts, history, politics, science and technology, current events, or your experience
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