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The climate crisis in United States - significant increase of heat



fadhilmd25 41 / 71  
Sep 13, 2016   #1
Ted Talks 1 - Al Gore - a climate crisis

Ted Talks Summary:

There had been a climate crisis in United States where there was a significant increase in U.S heat from 31 degrees Fahrenheit to 39.5 degrees Fahrenheit. Abstractly, the business sector in the United States contributed from years to years that show a significantly increase the emissions until 2060. The man suggested us to contribute to reduce this United States emission contribution by reducing emission from your home energy, from your car, become a eco-friendly consumer, try to reduce the use of carbon dioxide production machines and use of carbon calculator, campaign to the government so that it becomes the system where the CEO of companies have obligation to maximize the profit through carbonless emission, raise awereness through community by promoting to each other about the essential thing of global warning. Therefore, those things can helpful to reduce the emission before the year of 2060.

kiki23 37 / 58  
Sep 13, 2016   #2
Hi,I thought your writing is comprehensive enough but it will be better if you put the information about the experts talking and sources.


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