Colour plays an important role in everyday life

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel.

For this reason, attention should begiven to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals.

How true is this statement?
How far does colour influence people's health and capacity for work?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Color is the earliest thing that people can learn, it also plays an important role in everyday life. It influences can be seen in home decoration or fashion. It has been a discursive argument that whether to take colors into consideration when people construct workplace or hospitals or not. However, from my perspective, it depends on the use of those places to decide the significance of colors

On the one hand, it is true that colors in offices are sometimes not really important. In a workplace, what is really crucial is the technology or the environment. Clerical workers usually do not need too many colors or patterns in their workplace as they believe it can distract them from their work. Additional, these workers often involve in their work so much that they do not really care about the color of their office

However, the opposite would be true in some other workplaces. People who work in creative fields such as art or architecture find that offices painted with vibrant colors are more preferable. The general view is that those colors can help them to encourage their creativity. As a result, some companies such as Google, decorate their offices with colorful walls and details in order to boost the productivity of their employees

While the influence of colors in offices are about output, in hospitals, it is mainly about the health of patients. Obviously, colors are often avoided in hospitals, where people recover from operations or illnesses. Additionally, when it comes to hospitals, what most people think really matters is their healthcare services, well-qualified doctors or the facilities of the hospitals rather than its decorations or colors

Nevertheless, in hospitals for children, it would be better for them to be colorful. Unlike aldults, children often care more about entertainment, therefore, decorating walls with colors or pictures can attract them. Moreover, some children may be scared of hospitals so the decorations can help them to stay calm and be more friendly towards the staff.

In conclusion, there is relationship between colors and mood. For that reasons, designers should carefully examine the purposes of the place and decorate in a way that help the occupants to get the best of their surroundings

@mlee
Really well written. I enjoyed reading it. However, I think the last line of the first paragraph could be a little more clear.

There is a problem with your prompt paraphrase. It does not accurately restate the prompt nor provide direct responses to the questions provided. The questions would have served as the basis for the reasoning paragraph discussion sentences. If I were to have restated this prompt it would have worded in the following manner, which is more prompt responsive:

Various hues are known to have an effect on the emotions of men and women. It is because of the way that these coloring tend to influence the mood of a person that a belief regarding the importance of tinting in work rooms and clinics has developed. I believe that coloration does have a strong effect on the psyche of a person. However the colors should be used in a manner that matches the purpose of the room.

The above format is more aligned with the prompt discussion outline as laid out in the original prompt. Writing 369 words for this essay was irrelevant because you failed to proof read your essay. You have 22 errors covering spelling, grammar, conciseness, and vocabulary usage. All these errors will combine, along with the improper restatement of the prompt, to prevent you from achieving a passing score. The more uncorrected errors you have, the lower your score.

Do not focus on length since you are not scored by the number of words you write after the minimum word count. You are scored on the least number of mistakes that you make. Of what use is it to you to have a very long essay that is riddled with mistakes? You will not pass the test if the errors remain uncorrected. So aim to write no more that 290 words, spend the rest of the time revising your content and correcting the errors you made instead. Focus on proof reading and editing. Those are what will help you get a better score.