Commuters travelling in Britain day by day by car - IELTS task 1 (line grap)

popular means of transport in the uk

The line graph demonstrates the typical number of commuters travelling in Britain day by day by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030.
Overall, car is the most common means of transport travelled on a daily basis in the UK. Also, the figure for train and car rises throughout the period given while bus sees the significant fall

In 1970, the number of car travelled in Britain was over 5 million, compared to about 4 million of bus and around 2 million of train. Over 30 years, both car and train experienced an upward trend, reached around 7 million and 3 million respectively. Whereas, the quantity of bus travelled every single day in England was just approximately 4 million in the same period.

From that time on, the figure for bus continually decreased and is expected to fall at under 3 million in the final year. In contrast, the number of car and train driven in the UK every day is supposed to surge dramatically and be exactly 9 million and more than 5 million orderly.

The graph is supposedly about the rate of projected increase in usage for several types of transport. However, proper year on year or decade by decade comparisons are not properly referenced. The comparisons are unclear as definite year references are not used in the task. The reader should be clearly told what years the numbers refer to.

After a reference to 1970, the information shared became difficult to apply as per chart reference. This has left the report with a problematic C + C and GRA score due to lack of clear connectivity and confusing data presentation.

The essay also lacks an analysis of the projected rates for 2030. The errors in this essay all boils down to lack of information clarity and proper year referencing.