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Compare and contrast your way of live with your parents



doli 1 / -  
Aug 23, 2013   #1
We are living at the age of technology and internet where everything is growing so fast. New technologies arise every day. The way we live today is very different than the way our parents live. I think this rabid grows will help future generations and makes them comfortable and get whatever they need in no time.

Using the internet we can reach everything we want in few minutes. Gaining information becomes so easy cause of the internet. We no longer have to go to libraries and waste our time searching for knowledge source. Now while we are drinking our coffee we can find the latest edition of any book and order it online. We can use the internet anywhere without any wires. Also the internet allows us to contact with any person in the world at any time without the high cost of phone calls. We can see our friends and family at other countries using the web camera sharing great moments with them. I remember when I was child my father was traveling a lot to many countries. When we want to contact him we must call him phone calls with very high price which was not always available. And he also lost a lot of important moments to share with us. Now using the internet all this difficulties have disappeared.

The facilities that the technologies support us with now have no limit. Everything in the world nowadays is using technology. Person can use his phone to lock the door of his house, switch any electronic device of connect to his car. The car have GPS can tell you where to go and how. Mobile phones now facilitate the connection between people everywhere. It helps us to reach each other so easily.

These facilities make the life easier for the new generation to save time and effort. Life nowadays is so easy than the life of our parents the facilities we have makes us comfortable and will help our children's to live peace, comfortable and easy life using technology and internet.

nlakhots 5 / 7  
Aug 23, 2013   #2
Apart from technology do mention some points about emotional n spiritual aspects...!!
dumi 1 / 6793  
Aug 23, 2013   #3
We are living at the age of technology and internet where everything is growing so fast

We are now living in the age of information and communication technology where the world runs at a very faster pace.

[quote=doli]New technologies arise every day.

...this is implied by the previous sentence . So it becomes redundant.

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