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Ielts task 1 : Consumer of stuff in Britain - explanation of the graph


Arundyna 12 / 16 2  
Nov 16, 2015   #1
An explanation regarding consumer durable portion which is divided into 8 items in the Britain over the course of 11 years is illustrated by graph. Overall, it clearly can be seen that, the percentages of households with all divisions obtained a rise of statistic. In any case, television dominated entire categories although dishwasher got the smallest figure.

According to the table, from eight sectors, the television was the greatest data which got upward trend around 98% in the last year. It was stark in contrast to dishwasher, it was the lowest table around 3 to 5 percent. Furthermore, there was a telephone and washing machine at 42% and 66% in 1972 while in the last period, these gained 77 and 80 percent in 1983 respectively.

Turning to vacuum cleaner this was odd data, it started at 87% in the first phases and missing figure in the last period. Nevertheless, video appeared only in 1983 at 18 percent. Meanwhile, central heating obtained uncertainly statistic in the first year, but it still expanded following this year. When it came to refrigerator, it witnessed approximately at 90% in throughout the period.

broibra 17 / 19 3  
Nov 17, 2015   #2
Hi, let me try to give you some suggestion for this writing.

... while in the last period, thesethus gained 77 and 80 percent in 1983 respectively.

but it still has expanded following this year. When it came to a refrigerator, it witnessed approximately at 90% in throughout the period.


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