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The data based on the chart presenting the wheat exports of three areas from 1985 to 1990

phammaianh228 1 / -  
Nov 27, 2020   #1

wheat export - chart analysis

The line chart presents the wheat export of 3 regions between 1985 and 1990. Overall, Canada export more wheat than Australia and European Community for most of the given period. However, while Canada's wheat export fluctuated and Australia's fell, wheat export from the European Community rose.

Firstly, from 1985 to 1988 the number of wheat export of Canada decreased minimally from 19 to 17 million of tonnes. Then, Canada's figure rose considerable to 25 million, but letter went down significantly to 19 million. Secondly, European Community was exposed of wheat lower than Canada. Between 1985 and 1986, European Community 's fell slightly from 17 to 14 units in the next five years. Finally, the data in wheat export of Australia saw a mildly growth from 15 to 17 in the following year. Australia 's dropped dramatically by twelve units in the next three years, but later leveled out at this point in 1990
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Nov 28, 2020   #2
How were the wheat exports measured? Did they use tonnes? Percentage? Conducted a survey? Your summary overview is incomplete because of the missing measurement type. The overall essay needs to have one additional paragraph to meet the 3 paragraph minimum requirement. Your second paragraph is too compressed in terms of discussion. There is no analysis of similar information or overlapping information. Were there any equal years of export? Between which countries? The analysis of this essay is too shallow and lacking in content. Had you provided the actual image, I would have been able to show you how to improve the content of this essay. Next time, upload the image, you will be thankful that you uploaded it when you see the kind of advise that you can get when you give me the complete information to review your work with.
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Nov 28, 2020   #3
There are some spelling and grammatical mistakes in your work. The 'considerable' in the first line should become 'considerably'. The 'letter' in the second line should become 'later'. Then you talk about how between 1985 and 1986 wheat export fell for 5 years. This does not make sense. "Finally..." should become "Finally, the data shows that wheat export of Australia saw a mild growth from 15 to 17...".

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