A Day in the Life of Hollywood Paparazzi

It cannot be denied that famous people surrounded by paparazzi who often take such photographs and video recordings for money purposes. Some people believe their action is really disturbing celebrity's daily routine and it is violating the human right because they tend to ignore the privacy of celebrities. However, the paparazzi itself think that it is nonsense because once they choose their job to be widely known by people then their privacy is sharply gone as it become public consumption. What is become more negative is when the paparazzi are not having the license to take such daily documentation because they belong to none of company but they do capturing famous people as a freelancer to get paid. The freelancer paparazzi is not only have the chance to spread rotten news but also have lack of knowledge of the journalist ethics as they are frequently capturing famous people going out with their children without even thinking whether such action would be affecting the psychology of their children or not.

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It cannot be denied(is an undeniable fact) that famous people surrounded by paparazzi who often take ...(paparazzi often take pictures and record videos of celebrities for their financial purposes)

Some people believe their action is really disturbing celebrity's daily routine(disturbs celebrities' daily routines) and it is violating(violates) the human right ...

However, The paparazzi itself(themselves) , however , think that it is non-sense (or not true) . Because once they choose their job(jobs) to be widely known ...

Editor's note: I think putting "however" in the middle of a sentence is more recommended than putting it at the beginning when writing an essay/research paper.