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Deforestation is the consequence of both population growth and unlimited logging.



mjkule37 1 / -  
Nov 5, 2016   #1
It is universally accepted that there are a lot of causes of deforestation. First and foremost, population explosion all over the world is one of the major factors affecting deforestation. The birth rate has increased in a rapid way, whereas the death rate is declining. In other words, we need more food products to meet our demand. As a result, a huge amount of trees and plants are fell down in order to grow crops and cattle. In addition, over-population means that more lands are required to establish housing and settlements. If the crop produce is low, human beings have to cultivate more, which leads to further encroachment on forestland. The second point is involved in logging. That wood industries like paper or furniture demand a substantial amount of timber results in tree chopping as well. Furthermore, that loggers build roads to access more and more remote forests leads to further deforestation. Briefly stated, deforestation is the consequence of both population growth and unlimited logging.

debby17 8 / 19  
Nov 5, 2016   #2
Hi there, your writing is great but there are some correction for you in order to be better.

... of trees and plants are fell (cut ) down in

That wood industries like (...) amount of timber (which ) results in tree chopping as well

that (The ) loggers build roads

forests (which ) leads to further

Thanks.


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