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# The data on how fast world wide population growth in numbers and statistics of urban population

Dec 30, 2016   #1
Question :
The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs compare the data on how fast world wide population growth in numbers and statistics of urban population in different world regions. It can be seen that international population experienced a gradual increasing in previous years while there will be a sharply expectation growth in the next years. Besides, there was a rapid increasing in developed urban. On the other hand, there will be predicted a stable growth in developed regions.

The statistic of the world population was clearly pointing that the population growth in year 1800 to 1960 went up gradually between 1000 and roughly 2000 of population growth. Moreover, it will be predicted from around year 1960 to 2040 that population will be roughly 2000 to 8000. In contrary, along year 2040 to 2100 will go down steadly to be from 8000 to around 6000 population growth.

Besides, there is an expectation that in 2015 to 2040 will be a significant growing of pupulation in urban developed which it becomes around 2000 to 4000 population growth. On the other hand, there will be a stable of population growth from 2015 to 2040.

Osiremiza99 4 / 11 3
Dec 30, 2016   #2
@Muhayyun Mappare
You didn't talk about the contrasts between developed and developing regions, I think you should expatiate on that
krempetkov 13 / 29 6
Jan 3, 2017   #3
In your introduction, you should explain what information both graphs are presenting.

The bar graph provides information about the..... , whereas the graph reveals.....

It's good that you are giving overall information in your first paragraph, but it's better to stick with 1, maximum 2 sentences.

It can be seen that international population experienced a gradual increasing in previous years while there will be a sharply expectation growth in the next years ------ ....experienced a gradual increase in the previous years, while a sharp growth is expected to be observed in the next years.

During the period between 1800 and 1960 the world population had been increasing gradually and overall it went up from 1000(million) to ....

Also, try to use variety of transition phrases - you have used Besides and On the other hand - twice in your report

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