Hi Miss Ifra.
I will focus on your grammatical structure and hope it can be helpful for youI
believe that library provides more
accurate information (...) place to study than the internet
74 percent of students in California useS the internet
Internet is always preceded by article "the"
many kinds of media/material such as articles and videos
looking for information not only from reading but ...
==> where is your main verb?
to library TO not only
find books but ...
it IS proved that library has become
In conclusion, i strongly believe that library is the place ...
make sure that paragraph consists of at least 2 sentences.
Goodluck and Keep Spirited