The diagram illustrates various stages about making material called concrete canvas into a storage.

The diagram illustrates various stages involved in making material called concrete canvas into a storage area.

The initial impression from the process is that it comprises 8 steps, beginning with concrete canvas being manufactured from raw material, followed by a number of processing stages and ending with the final product.

At the beginning of the process, the concrete canvas is composed of 3 distinct materials. The surface is made of fibrous components, the middle layer uses dry concrete while the bottom utilizes waterproof substance. After this, the concrete is delivered to a place prior to being unwrapped.

The process continues with the sheet of concrete canvas having corners anchored by pegs and being spreaded on the ground by a truck until its width extends 10 meters. Subsequently, an air pump is used to inflate that sheet in one side whereas a door is settled in the opposite direction. Once this newly formed storage reaches a height of 8 meters, it is prevented from cracks and permeation by watering on its surface. At the final stage of the process, the storage is settled for 20-24 hours before being put into use.

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  Ielts writing task 1.
  

You incorrectly described the process and in effect, failed the test from the onset. Material was created (concrete canvass), but it was not created as a storage area. Based upon the illustration. That is impossible. Rather, the drawings show the process for manufacturing to storage. Storage refers to the process by which the item is placed at a location for safekeeping or until needed. The incorrect summary overview will have caused this presentation to automatically fail already.


Again, incorrect reference. it is a material that was created. The main points where your essay fails are:

1. Summary overview
2. C+C
3. GRA
4. LR

You will basically get a failing score in each section because of the inappropriate discussion content and sentence formatting.