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Question: The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
The graph below demonstrates and compares monthly temperatures and rainfall on average in the center of Kolkata.
Temperatures (shown as dot line) increase sharply from average temperature of 20 degrees in January to average temperature of 30 degrees in May. The temperature peak in May and then goes down gradually back to 20 degrees from May to December.
There is a similar trend for the average monthly rainfall. which the The figures goes up from January to the middle of the year and then goes down to the original level in January. The amount of rainfall is less than 30mm in January and it increases dramatically during January and July. The precipitation peaks at over 300mm in July and decreases thenthereafter.
It is worth mentioned that the majority of the rainfall lies in autumn (between June and September), while temperatures peak in summer (between May and July) and remain high during autumn.
I really need to pass the coming exam.
It would be great if you could check my writing~
Thank you so much!~
Question: The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
The graph below demonstrates and compares monthly temperatures and rainfall on average in the center of Kolkata.
Temperatures (shown as dot line) increase sharply from average temperature of 20 degrees in January to average temperature of 30 degrees in May. The temperature peak in May and then goes down gradually back to 20 degrees from May to December.
There is a similar trend for the average monthly rainfall. which the The figures goes up from January to the middle of the year and then goes down to the original level in January. The amount of rainfall is less than 30mm in January and it increases dramatically during January and July. The precipitation peaks at over 300mm in July and decreases thenthereafter.
It is worth mentioned that the majority of the rainfall lies in autumn (between June and September), while temperatures peak in summer (between May and July) and remain high during autumn.
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