The diagram shows the process of growing bananas for selling in supermarkets. (IELTS)

The diagram illustrates the way people grow bananas for commercial purposes.

Overall, it shows several stages of the process from growing and picking to the buying stage. There are seven main stages between the bananas
being planted and being bought.

First, the bananas are grown from nine months to a year with a few conditions. For instance, the weather temperature the oughts to be approximately 25 to 30 degrees and an abundance of rain. After that, they will pick the bananas when they are still green. To the checking stage, they carefully selected the good fruits and throw away the bad ones.

Next, the bananas are shipped at 13. 3 degrees in fridges. Second, they put the bananas into a special room where bananas become ripe and yellow to ready to deliver. When the bananas are ripe, they will be delivered in a lorry to supermarkets. In the

end, the customers will opt and buy the bananas for their
uses
.

The diagram indicates the number of stages along with the number of procedures per stage. The summary is not clear tothe vader because of the lack of development separators. The trending sentence should also make reference to the main stage from the diagram.

The writer should clearly indicate the procedures involved in the 3 stage process. It is confusing to read the paragraphs as these seem to be losing track of the procedures and stages involved. The count is off because of improper reference points. The presentation just might receive failing GRA and C + C marks, causing a failed final score.

The student must learn to outline the presentation prior to writing. That will help create a coherent presentation of the stages as divided into procedures.

you should have a small paragraph for introducing the diagram